The Door…
I am standing near the half opened door,
Turning back, looking
Searching for some signs from you…
I have been standing since a long time…
Searching for your heart…
Searching for your True Soul
Waiting for it to come back to speak to me
Waiting for it’s sound, waiting for its whisper…
Haven’t heard the whisper that I was hoping to hear
Haven’t got my sign that tells me to move away from the door
Alas! I have waited for too long…
Still Standing at the half closed door
Raising my right foot…
Taking up the first step to walk out…
The door closes…
Never to be opened again!
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July 10, 2008 at 9:25 am
Acceptance is a beautiful melody which you have captured within your words a truth beyond minds comprehension… I am bowing dahlink, wow!
Now don’t let my sentiment get to your head otherwise I’ll have to correct it again!
July 10, 2008 at 9:27 am
Thank You so much!
I am surprised that your head was wide enough for it to understand 😛 ROFL
July 10, 2008 at 1:03 pm
Well this is it, I was so shocked that I almost fell off my chair that you were able to write something so profound as this, shocked I tell you!!! You must’ve gotten at least a few of my genes … this is good news for you, it means there is hope!
July 10, 2008 at 1:14 pm
Wow!!! These are exactly the thoughts one goes through when walking out of a relationship..looking for some last signs of it still being alive at some level.
July 10, 2008 at 1:58 pm
hmm….i was about to say somthing,but then read the comments and forgot *sigh…
anyway a door’s purpose is to separate and protect…sometimes we need to open them for the fun of it..
July 10, 2008 at 5:33 pm
Most of the posts since I am following and reading your blog are somehow, somewhere related to my life. And this is just another one that relates to my life.
Excellent post Deepika. Just loved it… keep them coming… 🙂
July 11, 2008 at 3:32 am
OK ok… I’m back! I’m sorry I couldn’t comment on your earlier post… Jeez, You don’t have to write a poem for me!! 😀 😀 😀
July 11, 2008 at 9:54 am
@ SF,
I have always been your standing inspiration…. C’mon somewhere you had to admit it 🙂
@ Reema,
Thanks. Yes, that’s true. Its just an individual’s state of mind. His revelations, his feelings along with the thoughts in his mind.
July 11, 2008 at 10:29 am
Hi Vishesh,
Welcome Back. Well, go back read it again and then quickly go and comment…and then read the comments na! Happens with me as well at times.
Hey Joel,
Glad you like them. Thanks.
Nikhil,
Dream On Buddy! 😛
July 11, 2008 at 1:54 pm
Hahaha!! But anyway, this was a very nice poem! 😀
July 11, 2008 at 2:00 pm
Thanks Nikhil….. 🙂
July 13, 2008 at 3:18 am
You’re welcome! I won’t ever fail to comment again… Maaf kardo, please? 😀
July 13, 2008 at 6:51 pm
Dahlink I am inspired everyday the same as you, I just look in the mirror and go “oh no”
Confuzzed?
July 17, 2008 at 10:13 am
Nikhil,
Sochengeee… 😛
ISF,
How many mirrors have you cracked open till now thanks to your staring at them everyday. Bet even they haven’t been able to handle the stress of you looking into them 😛
July 23, 2008 at 9:10 pm
once it happnd to me…& relly thnx for bringin ma memories again….
i ws bck to past while readin ur post !
July 25, 2008 at 8:18 am
Hey Niyaz,
We all have something or the other to relate with certain things in the opposite persons life 🙂 Glad you like it.
July 25, 2008 at 12:53 pm
Dahlink just admit you love me and be done with it
Bow at my feet
go on
July 25, 2008 at 2:04 pm
*rubs her hand off her nose* Those feet haven’t smelled fresh roses or plain simple warm water since eons — get them to the river lady! They stink 😛
LOVE YOU???????????????? What do you think, I am out of my mind??? 😛
July 25, 2008 at 6:19 pm
yep , u knw lot of things nowadays i’m readin n others blog 2 resemblin same things happend 2 me…thn i thnk of dat those kinda things happenin all around me & leavin a smile dre 🙂
January 4, 2009 at 9:34 am
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